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  Chloe Morrish
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Not That It's Loneliness

not that it's loneliness
just one black bird
in the blue-grey sky

not that it's loneliness
just standing in the garden
waiting for snow

not that it's loneliness
just the sound of a jet
behind everything

not that it's loneliness
just sitting on the wall
between clouds and sea

not that it's loneliness
just a hole in the door frame
where the mouse went


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Source

From Stolen Weather (Castle House Books, 2006). Reprinted with permission of the author.


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Author's note

I wanted to describe a listless kind of loneliness, where time goes by slowly and anything can be stared at for minutes or hours, it doesn't matter which. But really, I hope this poem (which is really a series of linked haiku) speaks for itself.


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Editor's comment

Chloe Morrish writes excellent haiku - I've read her collection - and that's rarer than you might think. (It's an easy form to get wrong.) She has the haiku eye that sees things clear, and the skill to catch the moment in a few simple brushstrokes of language. The sequence is made up of individual verses, each a perfect haiku in itself. (They even, mostly, have the requisite number of syllables, to please the traditionalists!) That the sequence is more than the sum of its parts is due to the repetition each time of the opening line (and title) - not that it's loneliness - which becomes almost incantatory and invokes the loneliness / not loneliness that in Japanese is called sabi.


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Biography

Chloe Morrish writes poetry in Glasgow. She recently completed an MLit. in Creative Writing at St Andrews and has been writing poetry since primary school, when her poems were almost entirely elegies for dead pets.

She is a florist, works in a tea house and lives in G12 with her boyfriend. She is 28.


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